These words will prove I lived.
since you use little punctuation, i would eliminate it all together. erotic, sexy. well spun.
Ouch. I really feel this one.
This is a real zinger, Sara. At first I read it as: "sink your teeth into myshoulder"so it made the last 2 lines that much more surprising. Powerful and explicit. janetleigh
Sara, this is very sensual and charged with emotion.Rosexo
sara this is a chilling set of lines with an ominous velocity...beautiful but different from the treasures found on your site..
the last line really does it for me on this one. i agree with crimson flaw, a little different...
I like the melding of body and spirit here.
I like the 'inner person' thing - it gives a whole new meaning to soul food!
Oddly romantic...no, make that deliciously romantic!
let's see some new stuff on this shore. hope you're well.
Yummie :)Very tangible this one. It twists and it turns. I like it a lot.
Ah, what a meal...! I love the thought process. Thank you.UL
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