These words will prove I lived.
Don't you just love fiery nights - I wish...Great Carnival - I enjoyed reading all the posts.
Nice capture of the fire/ice there.
wonderful stanzas....the mood and the bare minimum make it a very powerful poem sara.
and how truly beautiful is the phrase ´´ gone by ´´ beautiful poem for it lasts within those words....
What Crimson said.And I love the singalong melody of it, too. Very wistful and sexy somehow.
mmmm... to crave such things. reminds me of specific moments in my life.
sometimes fiery moments can get addictive...wow! Thank you.UL
This was very poignant and it somehow was augmented by the recent rush of cold in my city. Very fitting.
Nice poem. I love the contrast of ice and fire.
perhaps eliminate punctuation.for example:Glistening silver falls from the skylinecoating my worldwith iceleaving me achingshivering cravingfiery nightsgone byi tthink it works.hope you're well.
Very nice...enjoyed this piece
Oops! I think I just accidentally commented from manystories account because this computer was logged onto that account. Sorry, that was me.
Hi Sara, good to read your lines again. Honestly feels good to be back after a long hiatusAnd yeah, Merry Christmas, and Seasons Greetings
Cool! This one sizzles, Sara..;>
I really like your imagery in this one.
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