Friday, May 23, 2008

a waterfall of
ashes
crash again my skin

hear me whisper softly
hallelujah
hallelujah


burnt remnants of
passion
leaves scars to mark my sins


pray now God will save me
hallelujah
hallelujah


pray its not too late to save me
hallelujah
hallelujah

6 comments:

john said...

Beautifully ingenious.... It seems to be the season of ashes waterfalls... At least, I can relate...

Cynthia said...

A cleansing hymn, words that
are sacred and authentic.

Scot said...

hallelujah

writerwoman said...

Thanks for stopping by.

janetleigh said...

Makes me think you've just walked through a ring of fire..amazed to be alive..rejoicing and repentant. Yes, a cleansing poem, indeed.

Ben said...

a waterfall of ashes...
your imagery... the unusual visuals you create with your words are beautiful.