"I am lonely, lonely.
I am lonely, lonely.
I am lonely, lonely."
I was born to be lonely.
I'd wake and hear the cold- splintering, breaking-
and slowly I would rise and dress.
I was born to be lonely.
A child's blood so red,
fear the chronic anger of this house.
I was born to be lonely,
and watch light slowly close
against the yellow drawn shades.
I was born to be lonely,
dance naked grotesquely,
on water I'm not sure is there.
I was born to be lonely,
What did I know? What did I know?
But that's all right.
"I am lonely, lonely.
I am lonely, lonely.
I am lonely, lonely."
I was born to be lonely.
But that's all right.
* This is a cento. That means this poem is comprised of lines from other poets works:
Danse Russe by William Carlos Williams
Those Winter Sundays by Robert Hayden
Whose Mouth Do I Speak With by Suzanne Rancourt
My Father's Hat by Mark Irwin
Father's Song by Gregory Orr
This was done for the site Patchwork Poetry.
Saturday, June 14, 2008
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4 comments:
I like your usage of other poet's words, it fits so well and the repetition of "I am lonely, lonely" feels child-like but somehow I think it's from an adult's viewpoint instead
So sad this, curated extremely
well. The refrain, tugs at my
heart and the other lines complete
making the tears fall.
i like how you found a way to unify the lines around a theme of the narrator's identity. it's great to make new things out of existing lines. like collage!
Amazing what you have done with
these lines.
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