Turn away your eyes,
leave me here with this
sweet sorrow
And I will clutch at the last
remains...
For this dream’s
come undone
Another discarded deserted one
A broken down disgrace
But
I can’t turn away my eyes
So I will
lay here beside
the last remains
our last remains...
For it isn’t over, no it is not over,
It is not over until
I say so
Wednesday, November 29, 2006
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i have to say i love this one too i like how the flow kinda sneaks along.
p.s. i found this old site i used to post on like back when i was 19 dont know if some of the poems are on my other page or not tho lol. heres the link anyways http://www.4degreez.com/poetry/3163/
All of your work is so fresh. I am just obviously really excited to find another writer I think is awesome! Once again, your ending hits hard. I like it.
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