Wednesday, November 29, 2006

The Last Remains

Turn away your eyes,
leave me here with this
sweet sorrow


And I will clutch at the last

remains...

For this dream’s
come undone


Another discarded deserted one
A broken down disgrace


But

I can’t turn away my eyes
So I will
lay here beside



the last remains
our last remains...



For it isn’t over, no it is not over,
It is not over until



I say so







2 comments:

Master swaV said...

i have to say i love this one too i like how the flow kinda sneaks along.

p.s. i found this old site i used to post on like back when i was 19 dont know if some of the poems are on my other page or not tho lol. heres the link anyways http://www.4degreez.com/poetry/3163/

Anonymous said...

All of your work is so fresh. I am just obviously really excited to find another writer I think is awesome! Once again, your ending hits hard. I like it.