These words will prove I lived.
Really like the first verse.
Oh, Nice. That is catching, quick and to the point. Just what I need. Good, and I liked it a lot!
Oh!!!! Oh!!!
This is a very sweet poem in regards to friendship.
Glorious words and thought! Love it!
Love the way soul and know kind of rhyme here. This is one of those poems I enjoy reading again and again.
Aaaah! Really sweet.
Very sweet and thought provoking.
The title is evocative and changes the poem for me. I had missed it at first; it reshapes the meaning.
I love your words. Such a beautiful take on friendship, thank you. I noticed the part 3 of your story earlier today, I missed it last time on 3WW, heading there to read :) Thank you.
I like that. It says a lot in very few words. Mad Kane
Very beautiful...
the last line is beautiful, a poem wiht your typically profound sorrow gathered in a simple sad twist...beautiful my friend
I'd be wary of using "soul" in a poem. It's one of those words that has been used again, again, again...just a thought.Hope you're well.S. Thomas Summers
i like the use of image and then message...it sets the tone for the contrast. not sure you need the italics.. well maybe not both of them.
I just love these lines:"the world is dying,with you here, I don't notice."Some people are just like that..a safe refuge from the evils of the world. I like this one, Sara. A lot.
Lovely this.
ohhh wow... brilliant emotion in just few words... loved it Sara...
Gave me an instantaneous smile. I know the feeling. Very simple, to the point, easy to grasp.
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Really like the first verse.
ReplyDeleteOh, Nice. That is catching, quick and to the point. Just what I need. Good, and I liked it a lot!
ReplyDeleteOh!!!! Oh!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very sweet poem in regards to friendship.
ReplyDeleteGlorious words and thought! Love it!
ReplyDeleteLove the way soul and know kind of rhyme here.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of those poems I enjoy reading again and again.
Aaaah! Really sweet.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and thought provoking.
ReplyDeleteThe title is evocative and changes the poem for me. I had missed it at first; it reshapes the meaning.
ReplyDeleteI love your words. Such a beautiful take on friendship, thank you. I noticed the part 3 of your story earlier today, I missed it last time on 3WW, heading there to read :) Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI like that. It says a lot in very few words.
ReplyDeleteMad Kane
Very beautiful...
ReplyDeletethe last line is beautiful, a poem wiht your typically profound sorrow gathered in a simple sad twist...beautiful my friend
ReplyDeleteI'd be wary of using "soul" in a poem. It's one of those words that has been used again, again, again...just a thought.
ReplyDeleteHope you're well.
S. Thomas Summers
i like the use of image and then message...it sets the tone for the contrast. not sure you need the italics.. well maybe not both of them.
ReplyDeleteI just love these lines:
ReplyDelete"the world is dying,
with you here,
I don't notice."
Some people are just like that..a safe refuge from the evils of the world. I like this one, Sara. A lot.
Lovely this.
ReplyDeleteohhh wow... brilliant emotion in just few words... loved it Sara...
ReplyDeleteGave me an instantaneous smile. I know the feeling. Very simple, to the point, easy to grasp.
ReplyDelete