Friday, October 20, 2006

Flag waving

I carry your scars

decorating

my heart and my skin
and anyone who has ever been
like me

can see it clearly
see it from miles away

It is like a flag I wave
and it screams of ache and rage and sin

and shows the world
just what I am
just what I am
at

4 comments:

  1. Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.ukOctober 22, 2006

    Wonderful mix of imagery & emotion here, Sara that truly defines this poem.

    love

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  2. AnonymousOctober 23, 2006

    Very powerful. The energy flies off the page.

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  3. writerwomanOctober 24, 2006

    Hi Jason Evans,

    thanks for stopping by. I am glad you took the time to leave a comment. It is lovely to know you enjoyed my poem.

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  4. writerwomanOctober 24, 2006

    Susan,

    you are so sweet for always remembering me and my work in your busy day.

    Your friend,

    Sara

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