tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post9073167343444271608..comments2023-10-26T06:37:21.560-05:00Comments on The Shores of My Dreams: Spunwriterwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-4033907303433922632008-03-06T14:08:00.000-06:002008-03-06T14:08:00.000-06:00Hi Sara, I was directed to your blog by (not your)...Hi Sara, I was directed to your blog by (not your)Average Poet! This is beautiful and does indeed speak of the feelings of being lost and frustrated that we all experience at some point in our lives. Beautiful work!Word Catalyst Magazinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05298690480593176959noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-2322723592410248492008-02-24T22:35:00.000-06:002008-02-24T22:35:00.000-06:00those last two lines are so true...the world goes ...those last two lines are so true...the world goes on...,thank you.ULhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15005895432233940416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-9161005872843667652008-02-24T15:20:00.000-06:002008-02-24T15:20:00.000-06:00something I would have written but probably would ...something I would have written but probably would not do as well. <BR/><BR/>I really like the last line - This world spins on, like I'm not even here - I feel like this sometimes.<BR/><BR/><BR/>wonderful creation!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-29401684807640287122008-02-23T15:24:00.000-06:002008-02-23T15:24:00.000-06:00This really speaks volumes!This really speaks volumes!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16688751251396388831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-70595867691494798272008-02-23T07:15:00.000-06:002008-02-23T07:15:00.000-06:00This is very emotionally strong!I believe that it ...This is very emotionally strong!I believe that it touches us more because we can feel it - as well as remember when we were there.Katie McKennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06042460109308890090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-3448433783526390312008-02-23T02:17:00.000-06:002008-02-23T02:17:00.000-06:00The random line generator started you down an emot...The random line generator started you down an emotional path, and you blazed along with a stunning display or wordsmanship (if there's such a word - there is now!)DayDreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16604829212360508478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-56577045225381958372008-02-22T14:21:00.000-06:002008-02-22T14:21:00.000-06:00Wow! That's all I have .... fantastic. So powerful...Wow! That's all I have .... fantastic. So powerful!ourladybethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08003089621986303208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-71502631570955558372008-02-22T02:56:00.000-06:002008-02-22T02:56:00.000-06:00Funny, Ario, but I thought of Edvard Munch, too. I...Funny, Ario, but I thought of Edvard Munch, too. I use his <I><B>Scream</B></I> as my other blog's avatar. <BR/><BR/>Actually, I <I>really</I> like the sound of the first line, Sara. It's strong and conveys what's coming next:<BR/><BR/>"And if I screamed out secrets,<BR/>purging my soul."<BR/><BR/>Also, makes me think of the <I>primal</I> scream and the scream of the banshee, riding in on the wailing wind. I feel the blast of the roaring scream. Then, the poem ends in a whimper, almost, like it's totally spent. [in like a lion, out like a lamb, sorta]<BR/><BR/>I'm just thoroughly <I>into</I> your writing these days, Sara; the depth of emotion your poetry is conveying is empowering. Kudos, and a cartwheel!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-82575800105744055832008-02-21T18:00:00.000-06:002008-02-21T18:00:00.000-06:00This poem reminds me of a summer I lived with my s...This poem reminds me of a summer I lived with my sister in Hoboken, across the river from Manhatten. People would open their windows at random times, and scream themselves raw into the air.<BR/><BR/>I like that generator too. I found a great line from it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-86638293555137864202008-02-20T07:01:00.000-06:002008-02-20T07:01:00.000-06:00I think, I know I feel very similar. Great words o...I think, I know I feel very similar. Great words of passion.<BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-41378319055045320112008-02-20T05:59:00.000-06:002008-02-20T05:59:00.000-06:00"This world spins on, like I'm not even here." Mm..."This world spins on, like I'm not even here." Mmm.STPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010661731570038007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-22554945871676410082008-02-19T22:00:00.000-06:002008-02-19T22:00:00.000-06:00Wow that is some angry poem. It was a good line t...Wow that is some angry poem. It was a good line to start a rant poem. Nice job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-20096348825551071532008-02-19T12:13:00.000-06:002008-02-19T12:13:00.000-06:00Damn. Scott said what I wanted to say. Your own li...Damn. Scott said what I wanted to say. Your own lines are purer and more emotionally charged. <BR/><BR/>It actually reminds me very much of that picture <I>The Scream</I>...<BR/><BR/>ArioAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-14425959725656742742008-02-19T11:42:00.000-06:002008-02-19T11:42:00.000-06:00"The oceans of time turn unafraidof all myfutile r..."The oceans of time turn unafraid<BR/>of all my<BR/>futile rage.<BR/><BR/>And if I screamed out secrets,<BR/>purging my soul.<BR/>Would anyone notice<BR/><BR/>or care?<BR/><BR/>This world spins on,<BR/>like I'm not even here."<BR/><BR/>i like it - save "oceans of time" - but i think you pulled it from the random lines machine. i find it a tad melodrmatic - too poetic - cliche.<BR/><BR/>your words ring truer!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-20685003145235689932008-02-18T22:27:00.000-06:002008-02-18T22:27:00.000-06:00and if I screamed out secretswould anyone knowor c...and if I screamed out secrets<BR/><BR/>would anyone know<BR/><BR/>or care?<BR/><BR/>a little like blogging, isn't it?<BR/>keep screaming, we care! (especially since you scream so poetically)Ralph Murrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02094202815537604157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-62616090814937722372008-02-18T18:44:00.000-06:002008-02-18T18:44:00.000-06:00that was so thought provoking.. one of the absolut...that was so thought provoking.. one of the absolute truth of life,, excellent use of the generated line... i rather enjoyed that exercise.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.com