tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post7271995761826336574..comments2023-10-26T06:37:21.560-05:00Comments on The Shores of My Dreams: Sabragewriterwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-65954562783441256052007-03-19T08:13:00.000-05:002007-03-19T08:13:00.000-05:00"See the carnage and know the truth"and the line "..."See the carnage and know the truth"<BR/>and the line "don't say this is true, let it be fiction"...also marvelous. So much going on here, I love it.<BR/>And thanks for stopping by.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-66862957449347274342007-03-16T09:50:00.000-05:002007-03-16T09:50:00.000-05:00The parallel repetitions, so unadorned and direct,...The parallel repetitions, so unadorned and direct, make it cohere.<BR/><BR/>Sabrage--hmmm. I guess there was a time when it was common enough that people routine took out their sabers to open a bottle of wine?Jim Brockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408507847342833145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-5406341013662417252007-03-16T08:14:00.000-05:002007-03-16T08:14:00.000-05:00"Don’t say this is true,let it be fiction," unspok..."Don’t say this is true,<BR/>let it be fiction," unspoken dry mouthed words you say,<BR/>clutching hands you pray, pray, pray.<BR/><BR/>This works very well. Thanks for this great post.<BR/><BR/>gautami<BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2007/03/aphasiapoetry-thursday.html" REL="nofollow">Aphasia</A>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-38713365522987928782007-03-16T06:37:00.000-05:002007-03-16T06:37:00.000-05:00See sabrage done before--messy. Your poem works we...See sabrage done before--messy. Your poem works well.<BR/><BR/>Very cool. I did not get around to answering this Poetry Thursday prompt-- Kudos for courage! :-)<BR/><BR/>~SaoirseAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-49961279427997695452007-03-15T20:26:00.000-05:002007-03-15T20:26:00.000-05:00I love the simplicity of the form and what you do ...I love the simplicity of the form and what you do with it. "pray, pray, pray" really works for me.Mary J.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01512803577441157561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-68211708979194880682007-03-15T15:00:00.000-05:002007-03-15T15:00:00.000-05:00I've seen that technique before, but I never knew ...I've seen that technique before, but I never knew what the word was for it!<BR/>And I can relate to your poem- oh, so well...<BR/>Thanks, writerwoman...Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-27413721821352797252007-03-15T10:37:00.000-05:002007-03-15T10:37:00.000-05:00I enjoyed thi, especially the first stanza. I thin...I enjoyed thi, especially the first stanza. I think your definition would be more useful these days than the actual definition!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-22114868239412416332007-03-14T16:26:00.000-05:002007-03-14T16:26:00.000-05:00I love your definition of the word. I had never se...I love your definition of the word. I had never seen this word before, do your poem makes great sense. It works really well.<BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-6266044082731725942007-03-13T19:48:00.000-05:002007-03-13T19:48:00.000-05:00This is rather intriguing. Your own definition of ...This is rather intriguing. Your own definition of the word 'sabrage' goes well with the sound of the word. Definitely a very interesting structure to your poem.Beamanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10516397458228874124noreply@blogger.com