tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post5677685097125116202..comments2023-10-26T06:37:21.560-05:00Comments on The Shores of My Dreams: writerwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-56302768599153534562008-01-03T12:40:00.000-06:002008-01-03T12:40:00.000-06:00hmm. interesting. the part about lies at the end m...hmm. interesting. the part about lies at the end makes one question the whole poem one has read. doubt all that has been heard. hmm indeed.Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06289013669698459078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-32005583669727413642007-07-03T22:09:00.000-05:002007-07-03T22:09:00.000-05:00really like the jux -- the small of "her" and the ...really like the jux -- the small of "her" and the magnitude of the avalanche. great image. nice site.hardyfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11124836171083026130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-44762075397163257542007-05-24T19:27:00.000-05:002007-05-24T19:27:00.000-05:00Yeah, this one flows and cuts. I especially like "...Yeah, this one flows and cuts. I especially like "running water, red and cold". Don't ask me why I like that line - I find the most haunting lines are usually the ones I can't explain.Stuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17856424693319815534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-5129517046630345172007-05-14T06:03:00.000-05:002007-05-14T06:03:00.000-05:00I have to agree with everyone else, this just touc...I have to agree with everyone else, this just touched me. It's been too long since I came for a good read and your words always get a real reaction out of me. I loved "stealing all the air in the room-leaving nothing left." An amazingly unique idea. I supose nothing can bury everything, especially snow.Clockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-84753412490609774362007-05-13T02:07:00.000-05:002007-05-13T02:07:00.000-05:00Engaging piece!Engaging piece!Rob Kistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-41070712499733519062007-05-07T05:02:00.000-05:002007-05-07T05:02:00.000-05:00I love the flow of this, the the vivid imagery emp...I love the flow of this, the the vivid imagery emphasized by the line breaks gives that quietly dark quality in contrast to the snow imagery. wonderful.<BR/><BR/>love the twist in the ending.<BR/><BR/>and all her lies you could not help but believe,<BR/>believe, believe....<BR/><BR/>snow can't bury everything.Raxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00481487787937999713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-46100978534610685352007-05-04T15:39:00.000-05:002007-05-04T15:39:00.000-05:00dark, it speaks of snow but it has a strange darkn...dark, it speaks of snow but it has a strange darkness and the last line is pure and driven...crimsonflawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16846132238371790709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-3609288543977199572007-05-02T00:40:00.000-05:002007-05-02T00:40:00.000-05:00Love the strong metaphors & classy last line. :-)Love the strong metaphors & classy last line. :-)Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.ukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08818807164881810296noreply@blogger.com