tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post4294347328627104106..comments2023-10-26T06:37:21.560-05:00Comments on The Shores of My Dreams: writerwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-27910090249061950602007-12-20T17:04:00.000-06:002007-12-20T17:04:00.000-06:00Gave me an instantaneous smile. I know the feelin...Gave me an instantaneous smile. I know the feeling. Very simple, to the point, easy to grasp.manystorieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02384170210884501774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-77631827523718930552007-12-02T05:48:00.000-06:002007-12-02T05:48:00.000-06:00ohhh wow... brilliant emotion in just few words......ohhh wow... brilliant emotion in just few words... loved it Sara...S.Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10414588068850101291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-38007108171160855142007-11-16T23:56:00.000-06:002007-11-16T23:56:00.000-06:00Lovely this.Lovely this.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-71689317053920131502007-11-15T22:48:00.000-06:002007-11-15T22:48:00.000-06:00I just love these lines:"the world is dying,with y...I just love these lines:<BR/><BR/>"the world is dying,<BR/>with you here, <BR/>I don't notice."<BR/><BR/>Some people are just like that..a safe refuge from the evils of the world. I like this one, Sara. A lot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-18263472252331639872007-11-15T22:43:00.000-06:002007-11-15T22:43:00.000-06:00i like the use of image and then message...it sets...i like the use of image and then message...it sets the tone for the contrast. not sure you need the italics.. well maybe not both of them.Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06289013669698459078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-74972295462823817242007-11-15T18:36:00.000-06:002007-11-15T18:36:00.000-06:00I'd be wary of using "soul" in a poem. It's one o...I'd be wary of using "soul" in a poem. It's one of those words that has been used again, again, again...just a thought.<BR/><BR/>Hope you're well.<BR/><BR/>S. Thomas SummersAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-50256574741947692472007-11-15T10:25:00.000-06:002007-11-15T10:25:00.000-06:00the last line is beautiful, a poem wiht your typic...the last line is beautiful, a poem wiht your typically profound sorrow gathered in a simple sad twist...beautiful my friendcrimsonflawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16846132238371790709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-72711845296835185602007-11-14T02:54:00.000-06:002007-11-14T02:54:00.000-06:00Very beautiful...Very beautiful...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-39777297071155329222007-11-14T01:05:00.000-06:002007-11-14T01:05:00.000-06:00I like that. It says a lot in very few words. Mad ...I like that. It says a lot in very few words. <BR/><A HREF="http://www.madkane.com" REL="nofollow">Mad Kane</A>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-4511719726920621392007-11-13T21:53:00.000-06:002007-11-13T21:53:00.000-06:00I love your words. Such a beautiful take on friend...I love your words. Such a beautiful take on friendship, thank you. I noticed the part 3 of your story earlier today, I missed it last time on 3WW, heading there to read :) Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-14746896071426698072007-11-13T21:50:00.000-06:002007-11-13T21:50:00.000-06:00The title is evocative and changes the poem for me...The title is evocative and changes the poem for me. I had missed it at first; it reshapes the meaning.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-81732212439808616362007-11-13T20:39:00.000-06:002007-11-13T20:39:00.000-06:00Very sweet and thought provoking.Very sweet and thought provoking.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-91779575162435299832007-11-13T16:59:00.000-06:002007-11-13T16:59:00.000-06:00Aaaah! Really sweet.Aaaah! Really sweet.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-90090513189376340992007-11-13T15:16:00.000-06:002007-11-13T15:16:00.000-06:00Love the way soul and know kind of rhyme here. Thi...Love the way <I>soul</I> and <I>know</I> kind of rhyme here. <BR/><BR/>This is one of those poems I enjoy reading again and again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-8865942772972948132007-11-13T14:26:00.000-06:002007-11-13T14:26:00.000-06:00Glorious words and thought! Love it!Glorious words and thought! Love it!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-31009262475780611582007-11-13T10:27:00.000-06:002007-11-13T10:27:00.000-06:00This is a very sweet poem in regards to friendship...This is a very sweet poem in regards to friendship.Head Cookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15878795387580544093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-75823529080396031032007-11-13T10:15:00.000-06:002007-11-13T10:15:00.000-06:00Oh!!!! Oh!!!Oh!!!! Oh!!!Mary Timmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06610970753020969331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-22857713182033221602007-11-13T10:03:00.000-06:002007-11-13T10:03:00.000-06:00Oh, Nice. That is catching, quick and to the poin...Oh, Nice. That is catching, quick and to the point. Just what I need. Good, and I liked it a lot!Mary Timmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06610970753020969331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-80737063234887376732007-11-12T11:20:00.000-06:002007-11-12T11:20:00.000-06:00Really like the first verse.Really like the first verse.Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08507037483019197630noreply@blogger.com