tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post2636856153725872378..comments2023-10-26T06:37:21.560-05:00Comments on The Shores of My Dreams: Time and Time Againwriterwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-33615800905024178232008-12-29T19:01:00.000-06:002008-12-29T19:01:00.000-06:00i enjoyed reading it very much.. and gonna go on ....i enjoyed reading it very much.. and gonna go on .Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-54514443417823903832008-06-08T18:12:00.000-05:002008-06-08T18:12:00.000-05:00Time the eternal foe. This poem iscleanly written,...Time the eternal foe. This poem is<BR/>cleanly written, as are the hands of time, blind rough justice.Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01013809806225482007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-4847938063546810652008-06-03T12:35:00.000-05:002008-06-03T12:35:00.000-05:00The ruminating quality of yourwriting, seduces my ...The ruminating quality of your<BR/>writing, seduces my mind to<BR/>pause to think about that heartless<BR/>mistress Time.Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01013809806225482007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-43667648740736365812008-05-29T16:41:00.000-05:002008-05-29T16:41:00.000-05:00i loved this poem how it traveled thru the hours o...i loved this poem how it traveled thru the hours of a life...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-50723307059284064622008-05-28T11:40:00.000-05:002008-05-28T11:40:00.000-05:00"Yet my hands are far from clean" there's a genera..."Yet my hands are far from clean" there's a general wisdom in that line. I like your description of struggle in this poem.Nathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11552467037640904091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-3028606939501461092008-05-28T01:11:00.000-05:002008-05-28T01:11:00.000-05:00This is incredible, Sara! There's so many excellen...This is incredible, Sara! There's so many excellent lines here:<BR/><BR/>"Time- a silent foe bent on thieving with its greedy hands." [I feel this is true for me right now, too. There's just so much to do; my backlog is a mile high.:[<BR/><BR/>"Yet my hands are far from clean-<BR/>volatile and mean, a dirty gleam<BR/>that shines." [the rhyme scheme here is awesome!]<BR/><BR/>"Swirl a fantasy like good wine<BR/>around my mouth:" [excellence to the 10th power]<BR/><BR/>..a poem with rhyme that really, really works..amazingly well. Excellent job, Sara!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-48379557380419720052008-05-27T19:21:00.000-05:002008-05-27T19:21:00.000-05:00the beginning's great - the first line and the las...the beginning's great - the first line and the last line says it all and the last line, great poemAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-58542714261386179772008-05-27T17:59:00.000-05:002008-05-27T17:59:00.000-05:00very nice... and this line in particular... is exc...very nice... and this line in particular... is excellent:<BR/><BR/>Swirl a fantasy like good wine<BR/>around my mouth:<BR/><BR/>wow....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.com