tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post116612225431819690..comments2023-10-26T06:37:21.560-05:00Comments on The Shores of My Dreams: Her Attitudewriterwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-1166458988154301692006-12-18T10:23:00.000-06:002006-12-18T10:23:00.000-06:00Chris,About the breaks being in the right spot, al...Chris,<BR/><BR/>About the breaks being in the right spot, all I can suggest is that you read your work aloud. That helps me to pause at a more natural point. But I do struggle on how to convey the pauses and the words that are stressed. I hope that I am succesful at that more times than not.<BR/><BR/>Can't wait to read more of your work. It's such fun to learn about other writers through what their work reveals.<BR/><BR/>Bye for now,<BR/><BR/>Sarawriterwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-1166458849048185672006-12-18T10:20:00.000-06:002006-12-18T10:20:00.000-06:00Hey Susan,your comments always make me look at my ...Hey Susan,<BR/><BR/>your comments always make me look at my work and see more. It so valuable to me to read your insights so thank you for taking the time.<BR/><BR/>Hugs, <BR/><BR/>Sarawriterwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-1166458773703478432006-12-18T10:19:00.000-06:002006-12-18T10:19:00.000-06:00Hey Crimson, no big deal about the typo. I love is...Hey Crimson, no big deal about the typo. I love ischelle's work and get that you were probably at her blog before mine and that is what made you think of her. Isn't her work so provocative and raw? She's very talented.<BR/><BR/>Anyway, hugs from me to you, thanks for commenting on my work. I appreciate it so. Hope you are doing well, my friend.<BR/><BR/>Sarawriterwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-1166429665861062792006-12-18T02:14:00.000-06:002006-12-18T02:14:00.000-06:00Hi Sara,I love the first line. Disturbing & gripp...Hi Sara,<BR/>I love the first line. Disturbing & gripping but it says everything.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-1166422279409942002006-12-18T00:11:00.000-06:002006-12-18T00:11:00.000-06:00sara....please excuse the typo...i meant sara and ...sara....please excuse the typo...i meant sara and not ischelle..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-1166422191126796032006-12-18T00:09:00.000-06:002006-12-18T00:09:00.000-06:00beautiful piece ischelle,the mystery of introspect...beautiful piece ischelle,<BR/><BR/>the mystery of introspection and the ghost of a solution...brilliantAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35391385.post-1166152302180826742006-12-14T21:11:00.000-06:002006-12-14T21:11:00.000-06:00appreciate your support on my somewhat corny topic...appreciate your support on my somewhat corny topic that you turned into something beautiful. And thanks for promoting the site. <BR/>The more I read this, the more I like. I love how you imply things without exactly saying it, and the pauses are always at the right times. I have a lot to learn, but we all write differently. To copy your style would be denying me to be me, so I'll just continue to do whatever it is that I do.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com