Friday, May 23, 2008

a waterfall of
ashes
crash again my skin

hear me whisper softly
hallelujah
hallelujah


burnt remnants of
passion
leaves scars to mark my sins


pray now God will save me
hallelujah
hallelujah


pray its not too late to save me
hallelujah
hallelujah

5 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 24, 2008

    Beautifully ingenious.... It seems to be the season of ashes waterfalls... At least, I can relate...

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  2. AnonymousMay 25, 2008

    A cleansing hymn, words that
    are sacred and authentic.

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  3. AnonymousMay 28, 2008

    Makes me think you've just walked through a ring of fire..amazed to be alive..rejoicing and repentant. Yes, a cleansing poem, indeed.

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  4. a waterfall of ashes...
    your imagery... the unusual visuals you create with your words are beautiful.

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