Tuesday, October 31, 2006

Something Sweet

Fall off of the
ledge,
so effortlessly.

Drift down to the
earth,
swaying soft like a leaf.

And the crash will never come,
if you only

believe,

you could always fall on me,
fall on me.
at

6 comments:

  1. crimsonflawOctober 31, 2006

    lovely... i like the anonymity you imprison in its title...i like the typography.. a thing on falls but fashioned from the disposition of a ladder..

    write on friend...our wounded hearts know little of the remaining verses..

    shakir

    ReplyDelete
  2. Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.ukOctober 31, 2006

    The poem's power is wrapped tenderly into your words.
    Very nice, Sara.

    ReplyDelete
  3. AnonymousNovember 02, 2006

    I found your blog through your comment on the Writer's Unbound site. I just wanted to say I like this poem - especially the emphasis on the last line.

    Jaime @
    http://www.fictionscribe.com

    ReplyDelete
  4. AnonymousNovember 03, 2006

    Hiya again. I'd love to know about your yahoo group. (Always looking for inspiration.) Also direct me to the NaNo joke?

    Jaime ~ Fiction Scribe

    ReplyDelete
  5. BrianOctober 26, 2007

    this thing is something sweet. very tender....

    ReplyDelete
  6. AnonymousNovember 07, 2007

    A gem.

    Sculpted to perfection. I can feel the lightness and the gravity pulling.

    ReplyDelete

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.